Tuesday, 5 January 2016

Dolby

I think you have a good range of shot types here and there is a clear narrative. You have utilized the editing techniques well and this hinges together.
Main issues:
Lip synching
Continuity (close attention to mise en scene and framing also)
Lighting/quality- particularly outside shots in woods.

Friday, 18 December 2015

draft 3

In Too Deep ;)
The quality for this draft is for unknown reasons poor so we will have to try work this out, other than that it looks all good from here.

Thursday, 17 December 2015

Second Draft

https://youtu.be/JAYf0kEnfP0

Second Draft Feedback

On our second draft we were given feedback, this feedback was to adjust all of the existing clips so that they match the lyrics and are on time. Also we need to look at the timing of the shots, some of the shots are slightly too long and need to be adjusted so that they match the pace of the song.,

Tuesday, 15 December 2015